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A good friend told me,
It's never too late.
To right the wrongs,
To change our fate.

I've always been cursed,
With such a bad memory.
But the one thing I know,
Is how hurt you must be.

Or perhaps that's not right,
Maybe it's not true.
Time heals wounds,
But has it healed you?

Perhaps you're still waiting,
For the one thing I never said.
Those two words, forgive me,
Sound so small in my head.

You gave me so many chances,
Opportunities to make it right.
But the only time I dare to think of it
Is alone, at the dead of night.

But recently it's hit me,
A little more each day.
But I don't know if I can change it,
I don't know what to say.

I guess I'll just remain cryptic,
For the time being, at least.
So I can summon up that courage,
Face the demons, face this beast.

You're such a good person,
Pretty, and very smart.
And although sorry isn't enough,
It's a damn good place to start.

So prove my dear friend right,
Tell me it's not too late.
For there's nothing I regret more,
Than losing you, to this date.
©2008-2009 ~Exangeline
:iconexangeline:

Author's Comments

"I asked her to take my hand,
I asked her who once was my friend..."


For all those people who want to speak out, but are too scared to do so.
And to that friend, who deserves so much more than I can ever give.

Lyrics by Hannah Fury.
xx Exangeline.

[Edit: Thanks Joeywaii and Blessed-Silence for fixing up that mistake. <3]

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:iconalexdewain:
I can't help myself to wonder the source of this feeling you've expressed here.

It sounds... so close to you...

--
http://www.joelalejandro.com
:iconblessed-silence:
Sometimes its the hardest thing to say but it's definitely worth it if the eprson means anything to you. <3
(BTW opportunities is mispelt, just thought I should let you know, stanza 5)

xxx
:iconjoeywaii:
(Opportunities to make it right.)

That's intense. I can relate a lot to this. Got me teary. I love the part about being alone and thinking about that person... Beautifully written work, honey.

--
"WAR IS OVER
if you want it."

Love knows no race or gender <3
:iconexangeline:
She does. I'm just too timid to approach her normally, let alone have a heart-to-heart.
It's just one of those things where you're afraid that even if the person accepts you, it'll be on a whim.

Anyway, thanks for the comments, and I've fixed up that mistake. :]

xx Exangeline.
:iconexangeline:
Ah, thank you. This has been gnawing on me for the past couple of weeks.
It's just one of those things where everything everywhere reminds you of it.

Thanks again. <33

xx Exangeline.
:iconexangeline:
It is, believe me. But not anyone you'd know, I don't think. I'm just so scared...
I don't want to make a wrong move, because I'm not sure how she feels about me anymore.
It's been years - literally - since we've had more than a "Hi, How are you?"

I'll talk to you more about it through email, maybe.
Thanks for the comment-age. Much love. <33

xx Exangeline.
:iconflarrie:
hey hey :)

nice poem.. nice shout out.. :) hope things get soughted out

stace xx

--
We are here to suffer
And our profession in this world is to die
:iconexangeline:
Thanks.
Me too.

xx Exangeline.
:iconflarrie:
:) lol im sure u will.. ur a very awesome person :)

--
We are here to suffer
And our profession in this world is to die

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