This hall is infinite,
Lined with metal doors;
Enclosed enclosure,
For those with flaws.
The ugly stay within,
The pretty rule the world;
Exposed exposure,
And in the corners they curled.
Upon the drastic contrast,
Apollo walks the walking way;
Approaching approacher,
Into the place with no day.
There is no strife here,
No disquiet that he might see;
Resolute resolution,
The decision to set them free.
Entitled to a certain god,
No humanitarian to be true;
Assasinated assassin,
Walks the way with you.
Approaches a door unlocked,
Stops in the threshold to observe,
Observant observer,
To a sight that is truely absurd.
The room is white stained red,
A girl lay flat with no eyes to see;
Saving saviour,
Holds her to his chest with intensity.
Alarm bells ring loud,
Pulling the fire escape in reflex;
Signalling signal,
Doors open across the complex.
Apollo approaches the doorway,
In haste undoes the clasp;
Escaping escapee,
Running 'till she awakens in his grasp.















Devious Comments
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My sis': [link] My best buddy: [link] Me: [link]
Because your obssessed girl. OBSSESSED.
But it's ok, you're kooky like that and that is why for I likes you.
I really like your poem too. It flows really well and I especially like your use of...well I don't know what to call it but the third line in every stanza, e.g. observant observer. You know what I'm talking bout CancerBear.
xx
And yes, I am, borderline-complete-kookie, obsessed with Coheed & Cambria.
Of course, everything in the poem is mine. Buaha.
It was actually going to be my art major back when I was doing a comment.
But again, thanks. I love reading your comments.
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EXANGELINE.
photomanipulation | poetry | prose | anime
Rodney McKay: I'm picking up a strange reading from right over there.
John Sheppard: Define strange.
Rodney McKay: [pause] You don't know what strange means?
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EXANGELINE.
photomanipulation | poetry | prose | anime
Rodney McKay: I'm picking up a strange reading from right over there.
John Sheppard: Define strange.
Rodney McKay: [pause] You don't know what strange means?
And AIDS. Always with the AIDS.
Kookie is good. And again it's why the world loveth you.
Mashidoodle says HI Hi Hi HI I say HI.
YOU FORGOT CANCER.
But otherwise, your comments are sufficiently saturated.
(I say hi to Mashidoodle with an exaggerated amout of I's.)
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EXANGELINE.
photomanipulation | poetry | prose | anime
Rodney McKay: I'm picking up a strange reading from right over there.
John Sheppard: Define strange.
Rodney McKay: [pause] You don't know what strange means?
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